Yakyuu de Sensou suru Isekai de Choukoukoukyuu Ace ga Jakushou Kokka o Sukuu Youdesu - Vol. 10 Ch. 37.1

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This is indeed very fucking stupid
You lose = Everyone fucking dies
You win = ...like a peace treaty...maybe some trade?
Are you fucking serious
I get that MCs nation wouldnt take them as slaves but come the fuck on
Dont act like these are just some misunderstood fellas and not grotesque fucking psychopathic monsters
There needs to be some kind of reparations and punishment here this is fucking comedic
 
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To aspiring authors, don't follow this example.
If you want your villains to get redeemed, than don't make them irredeemable psychos that see other sentient people as cattle from the start.

"They only eat other races because they couldn't raise livestock and didn't know animals taste better" is a morronic excuse.

You can't have a terrifying villain, with a mentality unfathomable to human, like the xenomorph in Alien, coldly killing left and right, and turn it into a lovable scamp at the end because "it tasted caulyflowers for the first time and liked it better than meat" without losing all credibility. That's what's done in parodies, with a group laugh at the end.
 
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Yes, that absolutely is fucking stupid, for reasons mentioned above.
 

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