Yandere Otome Game - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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Well that was a warning sign if you ever saw one. Its fairly minor but with her knowledge she should really be more sensitive to this kind of behavior.

Grabbing her arm is an assertion of dominance after all and shouldn't be accepted like that. He also talked about her liking someone else when she never said that, meaning he thinks she must "belong" to someone else. Her heart in that case.

This guy is bad news.
 
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Ummm excuse me? The webnovel of this exact moment that is a practical copy said: "My fiancé is a yandere. But he's someone who is difficult to hate." Why did it become he's not a yandere? And how come the manga artist didn't draw Wolf with all dark-esque tone and expression? It became so bland. This was supposed to be the revealing moment that Wolf, in fact, is a yandere! Oh I'm so mad!
 
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I was kind of expecting his expression to be a lot darker and angrier when he grabbed her wrist. The vibe I got from the WN was more.... threatning 😐
 
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@amiradiana Agreed. Imo the dark yandere tone would've come out better if Wolf's face had more shading on his expression in that panel or if his eyes weren't as shiny (bright eyes=innocent?). I just hope the future chapters will deliver on all those other yandere moments in the webnovel and not downplay them.
 
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Ah Lycoris, you should have noticed that moment of his yandere possibilities... and you also dug your grave when you just recklessly got along with him. The others already commented but they for some reason downplayed Wolf's reaction to her possibly having someone else she likes as compared to the WN... Maybe not to scare away younger target audiences?
 
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nononononono licorice nononono that is creeepo fwacko nope nope nope nope. fk this ugh what happened to the adopt a distant relative's son to inherit the house ugh why wait for your 6 year old daughter to push out 2 sons. ALSO HOW THE FWACK IS THAT A 6 YEAR OLD'S BODY LOOKS LIKE AN 10-12 Y/O GIRL IN HER GROWTH SPURT. So that makes the nyandere wacko 10 years old?
 
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I've suspected that the reason why the novels I love never seem to get manga adaptations is because artists are scared that they can't do them justice. Now, I have evidence. I agree with the other comments here. The tone isn't completely wrong but the atmosphere around Wolf isn't what I'd expect coming from the novel.
 
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thank you for translating! the last page was exciting I didnt know theres a novel but would love to see the story unfold. hope y'all get more free time ❤️


highly recommended!
 
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Hello, I'm the translator (Tian). Nice to meet you. (I'm not sure how to tag people but I think it's like this)

@amiradiana The original Japanese webnovel also says "I'm hesitant to call my fiance a yandere. But, he is someone who is not to be made light of." So, the webnovel and manga say the same thing.

My opinion as a reader: It's made clear in the beginning that Wolf isn't anything like the game Wolf. So when I read the LN, I saw Wolf as an aggressive and possessive kid, but not a dark yandere.
For those of you who have read the LN, the tipping point for Wolf happens with the lady in the otome game.

Please let me know if there's something wrong with any of my translations in the future!
 
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They're ten years old (Chapter 2, page 21). The manga starts out with six-year old Lycoris, but she's ten by the time she goes to visit Wolf (Chapter 1, page 8).
 

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