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E Elcief_SSN Dex-chan lover Joined Jul 22, 2020 Messages 920 Mar 23, 2026 #3 Felt a bit rushed. Could have drawn out a bit more. Anyeay we will see hoe vlong before it gets axed
Z zeronatsume Dex-chan lover Joined Oct 17, 2025 Messages 303 Mar 23, 2026 #4 a couple more pages to make the pacing feel a bit more natural wouldn't have been bad, but overall interesting start
a couple more pages to make the pacing feel a bit more natural wouldn't have been bad, but overall interesting start
K kenkagejack Dex-chan lover Joined Apr 24, 2018 Messages 488 Mar 24, 2026 #5 Hah, take that Op protag raised by undead / gods.
Forkuth Double-page supporter Joined Jul 5, 2025 Messages 466 Mar 24, 2026 #6 Typical slop would have him win easily. Im okay with OP power fantasy as long as theres some training or effort to explain power. Kid has potential but no training lets make him stronger works for me.
Typical slop would have him win easily. Im okay with OP power fantasy as long as theres some training or effort to explain power. Kid has potential but no training lets make him stronger works for me.
mayu_hojo Dex-chan lover Joined Jul 10, 2018 Messages 752 Apr 1, 2026 #7 lowkey a lil generic with the writing quality & setting but at least it's earnest with what it's trying to do... i'll give it a shot.
lowkey a lil generic with the writing quality & setting but at least it's earnest with what it's trying to do... i'll give it a shot.
Shinigamisama Dex-chan lover Joined Jun 24, 2020 Messages 4,269 Thursday at 2:30 AM #8 The kid is wack, I like him. Congrats on becoming a dad, Begonia.
S Saladguy_ Member Joined May 1, 2025 Messages 92 Friday at 6:15 PM #9 Not a bad premise, hope the rest isn't as rushed though
T tsuylen Dex-chan lover Joined May 7, 2019 Messages 301 Sunday at 12:43 AM #10 Generic and cliched right out the gate, with poor pacing But great art, in my opinion. I'll give it a chance
Generic and cliched right out the gate, with poor pacing But great art, in my opinion. I'll give it a chance
Wolf_Kz Fed-Kun's army Joined Aug 27, 2023 Messages 47 Sunday at 3:00 PM #11 He got potential huh. So we have the right to call him "Potential Boy" right?
M marcelolbaka Joined Oct 18, 2023 Messages 4 Monday at 4:33 AM #12 Really like the art style in this one, it reminds me of Disgaea
Ironclad Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 26, 2018 Messages 4,370 Monday at 1:49 PM #13 What a rushed exposition. Feels like it was going to be a reincarnation backstory but an editor told him people are tired of that.
What a rushed exposition. Feels like it was going to be a reincarnation backstory but an editor told him people are tired of that.
L Lunasol Dex-chan lover Joined Jun 15, 2025 Messages 1,036 Yesterday at 5:36 PM #14 Great story. But I got a trauma with anyone with name [ Will ]. Anyone carry with the name [ Will ], they will get a tragedy. Especially with the family.
Great story. But I got a trauma with anyone with name [ Will ]. Anyone carry with the name [ Will ], they will get a tragedy. Especially with the family.