Yoheidan no Itoshigo: Shinikake Koji wa Saikyou Shisho-tachi ni Sodaterareru - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - An Encounter in the Back Alley

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Typical slop would have him win easily.
Im okay with OP power fantasy as long as theres some training or effort to explain power. Kid has potential but no training lets make him stronger works for me.
 
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lowkey a lil generic with the writing quality & setting but at least it's earnest with what it's trying to do... i'll give it a shot.
 
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What a rushed exposition. Feels like it was going to be a reincarnation backstory but an editor told him people are tired of that.
 
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Great story. But I got a trauma with anyone with name [ Will ]. :nyoron:


Anyone carry with the name [ Will ], they will get a tragedy. Especially with the family. :notlikethis::fml:
 

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