Yomuin-san wa Yuusha ja Arimasen node - Vol. 2 Ch. 7

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It'd be nice and interesting if the three dudes turn out to be super nice.

"How ya feeling? Musta felt like your life was over, huh? Let us buy you a couple drinks, help you find a place to live, set you up with a totally legal job... This shit happened to us too."
Sadly not... :haa:
 
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I don't get it, why did he register as an adventurer just because his secondary revenge-target ordered him to? It's not as if it was required to help akari, nor is it as if mc really wants to help akari (mostly doing it as it is not too much of an inconvenience while he's otherwise really bored).
 
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why is an affinity that is strongest when the greatest peril is around bad? like, why would being strongest in the day be unambiguously better? war is often waged at night, as are ambushes, and monsters and animals alike aren't on any sort of schedule when they're rabid or starving. stupid, half considered cliches like this are so boring and tend to pull one out of the story when they're examined even a little bit. if you are writing a story, you'd hope that people are invested enough that they think about it somewhat. you'd want people to immerse themselves in your world. this shit never helps.
 

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