Big thanks. I like the series.
Some small notes: Page 2, Panel 2 - "When it's fruit" - should be "when its fruit".
Page 7, Panel 4 - "Should" is cut with the "D" being transferred to the next line (it should not).
Page 7, panel 5 - "Honestly" is way too small, barely readable.
Page 11, Panel 6 - same as "Page 7, Panel 4" with the word "Draws"
Page 20, panel 5 - "town's" should be "town"
Page 24 - "Dexterity" - are you sure it shouldnt be "stamina" ?
Other than this, its very good.