Yomuin-san wa Yuusha ja Arimasen node - Vol. 3 Ch. 15

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just found and caught up, great series.

with the amount of scummy, corrupt humans in this world, i would also just live in the snowy mountains away from it all
 
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Big thanks. I like the series.
Some small notes: Page 2, Panel 2 - "When it's fruit" - should be "when its fruit".
Page 7, Panel 4 - "Should" is cut with the "D" being transferred to the next line (it should not).
Page 7, panel 5 - "Honestly" is way too small, barely readable.
Page 11, Panel 6 - same as "Page 7, Panel 4" with the word "Draws"
Page 20, panel 5 - "town's" should be "town"
Page 24 - "Dexterity" - are you sure it shouldnt be "stamina" ?
Other than this, its very good.
Nice points. Would you like to join the group as a pr? I could use your help.
 
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Nice points. Would you like to join the group as a pr? I could use your help.
Sorry, i have plenty of IRL stuff going on, that limits my free time. Thanks for the offer though.
 

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