No big fan of vigilante justice, but the twist at the end was nice. Artwork decent. So we‘ll see where this is going.
Kinda pathetic though that the MC immediately panicked though he is supposed to be able to commit the „perfect crime“, lol.
Nice starts, I like that the MC is not dumb enough to be all hostile when meeting his target IRL
though the threat he gave to Baba in order to get information on other target whereabouts might reveal his ability to Baba - which is dumb action if he doesn't kill Baba afterward
but... rather than death the MC should consider giving them a lifetime of torture instead, by making them a paraplegic blind eunuch.
Good lord! that was edgy, I almost cut myself writing that :3
Oh great, I'm sure the police are going to (somehow) figure out the criminals are getting attacked in the dream realm/will be investigating supernatural reasons for the events. As if IRL they wouldn't just completely zero in on an obvious suspect in the same room during the event and ignore everything else.
I kind of like how just because MC is smart, it doesn't mean he's 100% going to be right/the good guy/win all the time.
I feel like his thinking isn't immature but its not completely mature either. Looking forward to the rest of it lol