Hey Im one of the people who TL'ed my friend and I who woked on this are a tad bit new to translation, thank you for the feedback we will work on fixing this in the future.Combine your double page spreads!
I echo my comment aboveHah... quite the series... these two definitely have everything working against them. As for the translation... it is nice somebody chose to pick this series up... but it definitely needs improvement. Grammatical mistakes or simply typos... but also the typesetting/formatting is just... not great. Text outside the bubbles and not necessarily properly using the bubbles that were there... but the effort was still appreciated and was better than nothing.