Yowa Yowa Sensei - Vol. 3 Ch. 20 - Yowa Yowa Date 1

[MangaDex]

 

[phil777]

Like I said, overall quality is not bad. However there are a few typos here and there.

 

[PureDisgust]

っ, or "short tsu", isn't a sound effect or noise someone makes, it's a glottal stop in speech and/or used entirely for emphasis
Translating it as "tsutsu" is fundamentally wrong, even moreso that you removed the entirety of the squiggly line (tilde) which is there to represent the pause
"----...!!!" is more faithful, but I can understand when someone uses an actual sound like "KH...!" or "GUH...!" to represent a sudden stop in speech, since it's easier to understand for a western reader
Translating a glottal stop literally, however, isn't conducive to the narrative or the comprehension of the reader

 

[ysil69]

Wait, so if he says not to hide it she wouldn't? This lady abit too easy...

 

[kingarthur020500]

っ, or "short tsu", isn't a sound effect or noise someone makes, it's a glottal stop in speech and/or used entirely for emphasis
Translating it as "tsutsu" is fundamentally wrong, even moreso that you removed the entirety of the squiggly line (tilde) which is there to represent the pause
"----...!!!" is more faithful, but I can understand when someone uses an actual sound like "KH...!" or "GUH...!" to represent a sudden stop in speech, since it's easier to understand for a western reader
Translating a glottal stop literally, however, isn't conducive to the narrative or the comprehension of the reader

That's informative even to people who don't translate. Thanks!

 

[exxeld]

bro need to claim her before she's taken advantage of lmao

 

[Sagara-Sousuke]

"is it wrong for me to hide them?"

Yes it is 💢💢💢💢😭😭