Yurayura, Yureru - Oneshot

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You know. It's alright. There wasn't sufficent buildup to make me feel the tension and the emotions though. Maybe because it's a one-shot, but it feels very constricted.

It's like you walked in the middle of a movie and a crucial scene happens. However, you barely know the characters, it doesn't pull you in.
 

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