so much for being the better version I guess? kinda funny when you're getting corrected on your japanese by the person you said made a shit translation
My version is still far more accurate than yours, which is borderline incomprehensible gibberish. I made a simple mistake with one word and then accepted I was wrong, and changed it accordingly. Would you rather have this series done by someone who actually cares about quality and is willing to put in some effort or someone who just throws everything into Google Translate, slaps on a bunch of text lazily (doesn't even bother to redraw anything, mind you), and calls it day? Fuck off.
If you want to scanlate something, that's fine. You don't have to be a professional at it. But not only have you sniped two series that are already being worked on, you have the gall to gloat about how you're better than me for correcting one mistake (which I could go ahead and do for you, too!), all while the comments on your snipe are saying they can't understand it, that it's worse quality than the standard for this series, etc.
You should try actually putting in some effort if you want to start acting like this.