First and foremost, thank you for the translation. High quality, professional and fast! 😍
It's getting really heavy on the "Translator comedy hour" asides within pages, which is really distracting. The memes at the end aren't really my thing, but I love that they are there to have fun, express your love for the series and give joke with readers.
It's your translation, you should run it exactly as you want, but that's my feedback.