Yuunagi Marbled - Ch. 9

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I really like her friends xD they remind me of my friends who loves gossiping and judging people 😂 However, they learned to understand others and be open-minded.
 

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Felt far too predictable and imo it was also sorely missing the psychological component that this kind of story wants
 
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I thought this was gonna be dark bruh💀💀 such a good read, thank you 🙏
 
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It was good, but there was wasted opportunity of good drama after Ena learned about teacher's "suicide" and Mishio's scars and backed off despite her bold words about forgetting bad things in the Mishios past. It was really good setup but everything was resolved too easy and too fast.
 
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That was sweet.
But there a strange pattern of manipulation from Mishio first kiss without consent and then later lying about the suicide to make Ena more attached to her and then Ena taking Mishio to the teacher without telling her. It could have gone horribly wrong but I guess it turns out okay????
 
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Felt far too predictable and imo it was also sorely missing the psychological component that this kind of story wants
It was good, but there was wasted opportunity of good drama after Ena learned about teacher's "suicide" and Mishio's scars and backed off despite her bold words about forgetting bad things in the Mishios past. It was really good setup but everything was resolved too easy and too fast.
That was sweet.
But there a strange pattern of manipulation from Mishio first kiss without consent and then later lying about the suicide to make Ena more attached to her and then Ena taking Mishio to the teacher without telling her. It could have gone horribly wrong but I guess it turns out okay????
agree with all of these. i did really like the story but i wish they had gone more into depth about certain things as previous comments have mentioned. also i feel that the teacher's impact on Mishio should've been explored more. that was most definitely a grooming situation and that aspect of it wasn't really acknowledged, all the focus was on the fact the teacher "loved" her and "wanted to give her happiness," but chose a man instead.
 

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