Yuusha no Gawari ni Maou Toubatsu Shitara Tegara wo Yokodoroi Saremashita - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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I don't mind about the changes, it was more make a sense.
 
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I love this manga! It's such a unique story that I cannot wait for more! Thank you!!
 
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kinda hard to blend in when you're wearing a giant helmet and have a huge sword
 
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>i want to live a life where i don't stand out
>proceeds to still use his real name and wear his iconic armor that stands out
no wonder the hero thought he could puppet this guy like a slave he's fucking retarded
 
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Hmm. Thank you for the scanlations but I think you should have a person do some proofreading on the english translations because some of them feels a little off grammar wise, It's a little bit dizzying.
 
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I see that there are still complaints about the translation, I try to do a good job. If you want to help me by being my proofreader, send me an MP
 
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page 11 - You could just mention dangerous part of the mountain or monster areas

Tree Man refers to Arga fiddling with trees all the time to gather nuts. Makes more sense than walnut.
 
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The dialog feels really disjointed at times, and sometimes also doesnt make it apparent who says what. Happens several times, just as an example:

"pettanko" - other girl
"kou her breasts are not flat" - mc
"from now on she is your older sis, you shouldnt say such things" - bubble points at other girl, but makes no sense if it isnt mc who says it. But still, why would she become her older sister?
"eeh it was a misunderstanding" - mc when girl looks at mc as if he was the one who called her flat, next line confirms this is what should have been made evident in previous lines
*line that confirms* - mc
"whats healing you?" - other girl, but no context
- superfluous lines that dont affect the following line in any way -
"eh, im your cure?" - first girl thinking a bit much of herself, why would you think that from that line? Particularly as just prior you had been called flat by him. Can girl read minds just like other girl?

Also, the other girl is continuously called "him"?
 
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I hate that Granny. Also, you have some mistakes where you are referring to Reno as him/he making me confused and i thought Reno was crossdressing or something. Reno is a girl, I think.
 
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Arga seems to be starting to get used to life in that village, too bad he ended up making a fuss in the end. On another note, Kou appearing out of nowhere makes me think she's not an ordinary child, especially with her supposed mind reading ability.

Thanks for the translation KidLinch, even if the dialogue didn't flow that well at some parts, I can see that you're putting in effort and its appreciated.
 
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why is the granny the guild master?? she doesnt do shit and she doesnt look strong at all....usually someone OP looking is the GM
 
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@AbyssalMonkey I did read the end notes yes. They didnt touch on any of the things I mentioned.

The sister part wasnt mentioned in notes, but I thought it was pretty obvious it wasnt in the adoption sense. But I still dont get why she would become her "onee-san" though. She was offering lodging, the mc should still have been the one responsible for the girl (or left her fending for her own). The way he just hoists more responsibility on her as a role-model or someone to ask for help, just because she offered lodging anyway, is what I am confused by. Would make more sense to call her the landlord (a much more acquaintance-like title) instead of being so presumptuous.

You are misunderstanding the part about healing too. What I said is that from the conversation and context, it makes no sense for the character to be so full of herself to think she was the one referred to as healing him. Like I said, the conversations are disjointed, with characters answering as if they presume stuff they dont have knowledge of (which is why I called her a second mind reader there, as in this specific case her presumption happens to be correct, which I know from meta-knowledge by being a reader and not a character), and other such things. Making for a very odd and sometimes confusing read.

As I see that you prefer aggressive name calling in your discourse, I will quote you and use as a response to you, to ensure you remain satisfied by my comment: Stop being ignorant and blaming ... for issues ... all because you ignored what ... said.

Although honestly I dont really feel so hostile towards you, I can see why you might make those misunderstandings if you skim what I had written a bit too fast, or presume unstated information (such as thinking I hadnt read the note).
 
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Thanks for the chapter and the notes. Still a bit rough, but it was easier to read than the last chapter.
 

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