@Kade_BSG Page 18 "After my master finished her first potion, she made an announcement that shocked me." This is supposed to be Laura speaking/thinking, right? The way this is worded makes it seem like her master made her own potion for the first time(How can she be someone's master if she's never made a potion before now?). However, I believe what was meant here was when Laura made her first potion, yes? Something along the lines of "After I finished making my first potion, master made an announcement that shocked me," perhaps? Might be best to double check the raws and translation because I think something was lost in translation.
I'm loving this, so please keep up the good work!