Yuutousei to Himitsu no Oshigoto - Vol. 6 Ch. 40 - The Mysterious Identity!?

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New girl is kinda annoying. Though it could be fun when she finds out the truth.
Damn, apparently she was introduced in the previous volume. Didn't remember her at all, even with all those nude shots.
 
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Pretty rough work. Typesetting is pretty shoddy and you haven't cleaned up the word balloons very well. Needs to have better consistency with the font (size, italics, etc) as well.

For lettering and typesetting fundamentals, check this out: https://blambot.com/pages/lettering-tips There's some stuff about making word balloons that doesn't applying but most of it is pretty useful. It also has free fonts that are a lot better than whatever shipped with your operating system.
 
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Page 17: "wonder if the numbers match" - Why is he saying this? Doesn't really seem to fit the situation.
Page 19 and 21 have duplicated word bubbles.
 

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