Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Jan 18, 2018
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Some good points... No level, game screen, and "I'm OP because numbers". The character starts strong (when she understands her power at least) but not quite OP (soldiers have a kind of strength that she doesn't have. Not yet at least). Backstory kind of justifies the attempt to kill the hero. (Could benefit from minor adjustments, but the base concept is clear: heroes have random powers. If you don't get a good hero, you can just reroll. Though things might get suspicious if it happened several times in a row.)
Some bad points... art is a little weird at times, some background elements are a little rushed in.
Also, the story starts a bit too fast. Not so rushed that it spoils everything.
For now I'm in, but I hope the pace slows just a little.
(Then again, it could also go the way I've seen in a couple of other mangas, where the MC rushes to the villain (here, the king) in a few chapters, gets smacked down because of arrogance, then the story have them go on a longer quest for strength before coming back for revenge, at which time both the MC and his nemesis are more prepared so things don't resolve as fast as the first time.)
Some bad points... art is a little weird at times, some background elements are a little rushed in.
Also, the story starts a bit too fast. Not so rushed that it spoils everything.
For now I'm in, but I hope the pace slows just a little.
(Then again, it could also go the way I've seen in a couple of other mangas, where the MC rushes to the villain (here, the king) in a few chapters, gets smacked down because of arrogance, then the story have them go on a longer quest for strength before coming back for revenge, at which time both the MC and his nemesis are more prepared so things don't resolve as fast as the first time.)