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this isnt that bad, would like to know if this has a wn/ln cause their seems to be alot of skipping around
 
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so, wn impressions, seems its not well writen, its all over the place with alot of references and ideas taken from other writers and popular movies, leaves asking more questions than answers, hard to follow when the from point a-b or a-c isnt written and instead randomly skips straight to k,q, or x with no reason, it goes out of way to imply harem and never get to or move towards that direction...... at least with the mangas 4 chpts i could find out
that it isnt isekai but implies he came from earth with knowledge which is only used to explain the writers reason for some of things that happen, the emperor is the previous one that was the father of the current empress, and the dad fluffing is son is extreme all the time as a theme, he is way to much o.p./good guy all the time, gets a dragon to follow him for a stupid reason, save angels and goddesses from being cursed apparently by the creation god, save a princess who is 276 yrs old and can only live is a special area who helps take back her country then promises to get together when he is older only to dissapear from the story later, is told to do bad things after being given divinty by his processing angel then attacked by the creation god cause he does too much good things that his soul grade wont lower, the alex alliance grows, saves more, redevelop an ancient paradise city in the empire that god cursed, keeps doing the one man plus empress solving quests and even after marrying angie doesnt get to marrying the empress who seems fringe lover/stuck as single forever with more maids being added towards the harem route and never getting there
, hopefully this isnt some easy/cheap money grap by the company to just throw and new series out their to see if it sticks and they can fix alot of the writers flaws with his story telling
 
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Yeah, an empress walk alone in a street, by foot.

Of course.

Next chapter, a giant krakken appear in the one meter pond in his backyard.
 
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They're rushing the story too much.
I have feeling this will be axed around 15-25 chapters
 
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This got really fast exponentially bad. Like Smartphone in a another World bad. The story is incoherent and rushed faster than pregnant women to the c-section and the plot points logic are as concrete and solid as a spaghetti which has been left out in the rain for half a day.
 
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Yeah, no. It’s so bland that it’s not even entertainingly bad.
 
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yeah of course, 16 years old girls are attracted to 5 years old. happens everytimes.
 
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@Grom yeah, everybody screams if it's a manga, but if it's in a galaxy far far away then it's okay.
 
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haha yes 16 years old girl croooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooottttttttttt
 
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What even is the main character? It doesn't feel as if he is even human. Sure, some manga have an mc that acts wrong for their age, or extreme in some regard, but this guy seems to barely even have emotions.
 
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7 years old boy and 16 years old girl.

That seems comprehensibly appropriate. lol
 
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Okay, 7 chapters in and I'm personally titling this:
Mr Rodgers gets reincarnated as Chibi Judge Dredd
 

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