Zense wa Kentei. Konjou Kuzu Ouji - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Knight

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...Regrettably, I have failed in my mission... But perhaps you can keep the torch lit... There is an old saying in my family... Thou who art Undead, art chosen... In thine exodus from the Undead Asylum, maketh pilgrimage to the land of Ancient Lords... When thou ringeth the Bell of Awakening, the fate of the Undead thou shalt know... Well, now you know... And I can die with hope in my heart...
 
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this chapter should expanded into 2-3 chapters. Author really need to make MC motivation growing naturally instead of just few lines from a fallen soldier. He got no "sword principe" for all of his lives, and changed his mind for like, two minutes? Otherwise, everything is good. The characters, art, and plot is really well done.
 
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First 2 chapters was good, but this chapter made it a 1/10 series already… not worth Reading anymore of it
 
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Okay, so it's missing pages and I'm not just an idiot.
Was super confused about where that dude went
 
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Well, he sure gave up on that quick.

So what's the deal with the assassin? I thought he was going to do some cool things where he grabs the sword and cuts the guy in half midair, but no, he just...disappears the next page. Nobody is ever shown killing him, he just... isn't there anymore.

Also, it doesn't make sense for Fai to suddenly be as good as he was in his last life, because even if he did remember all his skills, he wouldn't have had the physical conditioning in this life.
 

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