Zettai Maken no Duelist - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.1

[MangaDex]

 

[Oeconomist]

So far, so good.

(But “furth” is plainly a mistaking of “forth”.)

 

[hanahaneull]

No nipples?

 

[blablablub]

So far, so trash.

 

[cryum]

Mate. What was the point of your super stealthy wrist whipswords if you need to swing them wildly in every direction before actually hitting something? You don't even keep them floating around like drones when you've already thrown stealth out the window. Was a gun or crossbow too cool for you?

 

[unnamederror]

did he really shout "ASS A SINATE"??
AHHHHH i'am dies from cringe

 

[GreenRanger4315]

Story as of now is meh. That being said Thanks Galaxy!
Also I appreciate the SFW edits made

 

[Dwarfy2k]

Geh partial ch1's are the worst, not even a clean break either damn you publishers.

So far super generic and using a victim for the titty flesh shots comes off pretty poorly. I'll keep reading for now but theres some jank writing here already. Specially when you have an assassin walking into a open room and somehow not being seen.

 

[itsy23]

too edgy