Otoko Girai na Bijin Shimai o Namae mo Tsugezu ni Tasuketara Ittai Dounaru? - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

[Eighty-six]

Pretty much, with comercial intensive[sic] to boot.

Do you recognize any cases where women are portrayed cynically or harshly by a female author without it being the product of internalized misogyny?

 

[altmaria]

Do you recognize any cases where women can be portrayed cynically or harshly by a female author without it being the product of internalized misogyny?

Absolutely, especially when consequence for their actions is actually depicted.

 

[Eighty-six]

Absolutely, especially when consequence for their actions is actually depicted.

I'm missing some context to the bolded. Could you help me out a bit?

 

[TheEjaculator]

And that's how you know this story was written by a man.

That... and the fact lack of consequencial trauma for what those two girls experienced in the first two chapters.

The trauma just turned them all into Yanderes so there's that. Also a wish-fulfillment story aimed at men is written by a man, what a shock toootally couldn't have guessed it.

yes its mostly wholesome stuff....and the 2 sisters being creepily obsessed with the MC there's really no drama in it at all

I guess the author just wanted to write a story about 2 (possibly more) girls being obsessed about the MC which is very common in romcoms and nothing special. But I swear to god this has to be the most retarded and unrealistic way he could have set it up lmao.

 

[altmaria]

I'm missing some context to the bolded. Could you help me out a bit?

Sure, but I don't write essays with bibliography for free though. I can give you an estimate for how much I charge for it.

 

[vannn]

Still don’t buy his rationale for why they can’t know it was him, makes his “outing” weirder too.

 

[Notme321]

Ight cya guys next month

 

[popo53414]

run forrest run

 

[InsidiousIntent]

Still don’t buy his rationale for why they can’t know it was him, makes his “outing” weirder too.

I guess the author just wanted to write a story about 2 (possibly more) girls being obsessed about the MC which is very common in romcoms and nothing special. But I swear to god this has to be the most retarded and unrealistic way he could have set it up lmao.

There's a LOT of context from the novel missing, though, a fair amount of it comes as "backstory" later on as well. It's still moderately clumsy, but more coherent than this adaptation. Whether or not that will be included, I don't know. Neither one is designed to win a Naoki, so it is what it is.

 

[Haezer]

The comment section is as enjoyable as the manga itself. Nice

 

[Nermie01]

I swear, the number of people here who simply don't understand saviour imprinting is a form of trauma coping (even if it's not always a HEALTHY form of coping). Read some psychology texts, yeesh.

 

[SteamySteams]

boy, they already know!

Always has been

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

THERE IS A NOVEL?

LN and WN.

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

yes its mostly wholesome stuff....and the 2 sisters being creepily obsessed with the MC there's really no drama in it at all

There's some family drama with his dad marrying the "wrong" woman, his branch of the family tree being disowned, and his relatives eventually finding him and having his back. But it's late in the story.

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

Regardless of the rather ridiculous way that the trauma affected the girls, I will say at least that I'm glad that they didn't spend multiple chapters with him sneaking around them and beating around the bush while blushing and running away from them.

Either that or this is just a big tease for now.

It's not unusual for someone who's been through the trauma of an attack of this nature, even if it hasn't been completed, to become either terrified of sex or hypersexualized in response. Obviously, here, it went the latter (or we'd be reading a genderswapped Sensitive Boy).

 

[Ari2142]

Haha good luck boy.

 

[Srikrish]

THERE IS A NOVEL?

Yes there is

 

[Reimos]

I wanted to talk to you Hayato

 

[raze2012]

And that's how you know this story was written by a man.

That... and the fact there's a lack of consequencial trauma for what those two girls experienced in the first two chapters.

Ehh everyone processes trauma differently.

And yes, I'm not pretending to read this for the commentary on mental trauma lol. Try a psychological genre manga for that, like Bunny Girl Senpai or Monogatari

 

[raze2012]

For real yeah, funny enough I see these types of tryhards even in the comments of actual hentai stories.

-Opens blatant hentai manga
-Complains why is it hentai

As I always say: If you don't want trash, stop dumpster diving. The title is right there:

The Case About Two Sisters Becoming Extremely Obsessed With Me After I Saved Them

If you were hoping for subtlety you frankly don't deserve it at that point.