Alcafus - Vol. 4 Ch. 27 - Journey

[MangaDex]

 

[Hoezell]

This series had potential, too bad it fell short. RIP

 

[SpecialProjectY]

This series had potential, too bad it fell short. RIP

It rode on ecchi stuff for far too long just to be somewhat serious at very end.
Cafus nativity was far too irritating to keep on reading.

 

[QueenNether]

It was mediocre at best and boring at worst. Didn't help that names changed very often.

 

[DreadParadox]

I re-read it just to understand to story further and its meh at best. If binged read, the story felt lacking in direction.

 

[StLOrca]

It made no sense. Names changed constantly (Oi to Ooi to Oui in one chapter); the plot stutter-stepped all over the place with no pace or rhythm; people constantly changed locations with no indication of how they got there; distances were wildly inconsistent; the Big Bad woke up and…disappeared, instead of bringing on the Apocalypse…I could go on and on. On the other hand, butt shots a-plenty, so it all evened out (insert eyeroll here).

 

[SalvySaroj]

Not recommended at all, after half-way it just goes shittier, poopier and whatnot 💩

 

[Vergil-sama]

It was kinda short and sweet, I did feel it was all over the place with the translation (especially last chapter) that it felt like no characters actually cared about MC except the main Cafus. When before they did (in earlier chapters) Idk, the ending felt rushed and lackluster

 

[Davrwa]

Translation issues aside, the story itself was very aimless. It felt like the author only had an initial concept, but no clear go to where to take the story. Or whatever they had in mind at the beginning was cast aside because of the publisher, editor, or just the author changing ideas. Its a shame, because the start was quite interesting, and the art is pretty and the girls are hot. A real shame.

 

[Jstar338]

Translation issues aside, the story itself was very aimless. It felt like the author only had an initial concept, but no clear go to where to take the story. Or whatever they had in mind at the beginning was cast aside because of the publisher, editor, or just the author changing ideas. Its a shame, because the start was quite interesting, and the art is pretty and the girls are hot. A real shame.

It feels like the author had the idea for the world, but started without thinking of an actual plot. So the story feels like it comes out of nowhere

 

[RevenRhys]

The art was pretty, it does seem like the author started with a concept and then changed their mind or something. This is the first mc I've seen that's okay with proximty to girl's faces leading to some really cute panels. We should have gotten at least a smooch at the end there smh, you guys saved the world, come on.

 

[djbraianxtr]

I, as opposed to most people here, think it was a nice short story. Sure the ending was rushed and probably axed but we at least got a somewhat conclusive ending, just a cute ecchi story