Sono Monban, Saikyou ni Tsuki: Tsuihou Sareta Bougyoryoku 9999 no Senshi, Outo no Monban to shite Musou Suru - Vol. 7 Ch. 34.1

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Some texts are misplaced in page 9 and 10.
Page 9: "Unbelievable!" should be the background spoken line and the contemplation about disappearing once the guilt is gone should be in the box.

Page 10: "How can I do that?" and "Should I set up a secret meeting?" should be switched.
 
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Some texts are misplaced in page 9 and 10.
Page 9: "Unbelievable!" should be the background spoken line and the contemplation about disappearing once the guilt is gone should be in the box.

Page 10: "How can I do that?" and "Should I set up a secret meeting?" should be switched.
No wonder. The dialogue sounds weird when I read it.
 
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I actually forgot what this guy did (a long time since i have read the manga)... oh boy, oh boy. This is not a simple "you raised your sword against me" type of thing... this is a full Anakin (the women and the children too)

Ok ok... I know Japan´s authors like this "all ok" thing and redemption stories... but the "I was possessed" excuse does not cut it here, trial, punishment... something. Not "now you are the witch´s pet"
 
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You know in hindsight, a demons influence is quite terrifying. Imagine having a character showing anger or a bit hatred due to situation dealt to him.

He wouldn't do anything drastic and would probably move on from it eventually. But if he gets infected by demon influence, he could be forced to go on an all out rampage destroying any thing in site until hes fully destroyed.

How can someone control themselves from feeling negative emotions?
 
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I have so little idea what's going on any more that I might as well drop this. Not like it was a masterpiece anyway.
 
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Well it sounds like he'll go away when he manages to redeem himself I guess? But still, trying to write it off as "you were just influenced by demons" feels kinda dumb when I'm pretty sure he kicked out Sieg/etc before that, and only got corrupted once things started going to shit because he was already an asshole.
 
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Well it sounds like he'll go away when he manages to redeem himself I guess? But still, trying to write it off as "you were just influenced by demons" feels kinda dumb when I'm pretty sure he kicked out Sieg/etc before that, and only got corrupted once things started going to shit because he was already an asshole.
that's why he still has to redeem himself. the other cured demon guy isnt doing any redeeming cuz he wasnt a (total) ass before.
 
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"he'll disappear again" YA RIGHT, NO WAY THIS ROACH LEAVES THAT EASILY (i'm honestly fine with it he's pretty funny. and i totally saw this coming so i was already prepared...i mean who didn't?)
 
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If people don't like Nahat's "Redemption", remember that he is basically punished for his crime by turning into.... marketable masco- I mean, a bird. So he lost most of things, but still alive.
Is that a good writing.... nah, but it's not end of the world kind of bad writing.
 

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