The Fake Alchemist - Ch. 14

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Thanks for the chapter.

Unfortunately I think I just have to drop this series, I hate this MC too much. "Go ahead and keep killing! Get all the bad out of your system. I'll be ready to talk when ever you want :)"
 
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"Do I have to skin you alive for you to do so?"
Well, you just did.

"Why are you making it like I'm the bad guy?"
Because you are.

These characters asking such questions...

Yeah, there's a difference between sacrificing yourself and sacrificing others.

I don't quite think she's someone you should talk with like that.

"Maybe she made them insensitive to death?"
More like she's insensitive to death.
 
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Oh for fuck's sake. We don't need a flashback mid swing. You already set up he was going to come up with counter-measures of his own. His complex about being a "fake" is just dumb. If that was going to be a major character flaw, then why would you reveal it to us through these half-assed flashbacks? I know it's cliche but show us the fall, don't start the series in media res. We're going with the insane pacifist mindset after he just watched her "kill" dozens of people? He can't stomach violence but dissolving bodies with slimes, skinning alive, and smashing someone's arms with a billy club is fine? Don't seal the mage's mouth or knock them unconscious though, that might actually be helpful.
 
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Oh shit. I think this is something similar to FMA's country wide alchemy circle. She is going to take everyone's soul in the circle.
 

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