Dex-chan lover
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A filthy lake is probably a terrible spot to lose your virginity.
Also, them having to hide their relationship feels really forced at this point; it'd have had more impact if the other girls liked MC, or if the hero liked the priestess, or something like that - because currently they all seem really friendly, and not attracted to each other outside of the MC FMC couple.
You might say
"B-b-but what that party that killed each other in a lovers quarrel!?",
but am I supposed to currently believe the hero, or any of the other girls would react like that? Or that the MC would plausibly believe they would? C'mon.
Also, them having to hide their relationship feels really forced at this point; it'd have had more impact if the other girls liked MC, or if the hero liked the priestess, or something like that - because currently they all seem really friendly, and not attracted to each other outside of the MC FMC couple.
You might say
"B-b-but what that party that killed each other in a lovers quarrel!?",
but am I supposed to currently believe the hero, or any of the other girls would react like that? Or that the MC would plausibly believe they would? C'mon.