Deretai Kanojo no Uraomote - Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[WeabooExtract]

Sorry, but you've gotta go for it instead of expecting the other party to just keep hovering around you for the rest of your life.

If you don't show any obvious romantic interest, a person who does is going to win.

 

[zenpaibacon]

 

[RoxasJ]

And right off the bat, the returning girl is already the better choice.

 

[Nehona]

I don't know about this one....

The returning girl seems to be the teasing type. The VERY teasing type, and I don't particularly like that. Also, we still don't know WHY she rejected him back then. If she rejected him because she didn't like him that way back then it's fine....
But if she rejected him because she thought it was fun to do so, and wanted to keep him tense, then it's not really fine in my book. And yes, imo that's entirely possible in this type of manga.

But the mega tsundere girl is really NO GOOD either. Because there's a limit to being tsundere, really. It seems she's sort of... abusive in her behaviour, and I really dislike that.
Also, proper communication please. If you never tell the person that you like him and in fact treat him harshly, what do you expect is going to happen? Why do you even think he's going to ever like you?

Let's see what happens in the next few chapters...

 

[kleinsf]

Tsunderes deserve this kind of treatment. I'll stick to this shi until the blond girl loses, which is very likely.

 

[Oeconomist]

The drawing is awkward, and the pacing is start-and-stop. So I'm guessing that most of the problem with the translated dialogue is with the source, rather than in the translation. Still, the translator doesn't really get the concept of tsundere; equating it with just tsun.

 

[PramRamadhan]

So I'm guessing that most of the problem with the translated dialogue is with the source, rather than in the translation.

Among the manga projects that I translated, this is a manga that made me confused during the translation process. I had difficulty on pages 25-30.

 

[blablablub]

My god is this dumb. Almost all dialogue felt like two people independently talking to wall.

I just wanted to see the view

By climbing up the fence?

Anyway, ditch the toxic childhood "friend"

 

[PramRamadhan]

Also, we still don't know WHY she rejected him back then. If she rejected him because she didn't like him that way back then it's fine....

A new heroine appears, someone different from the girl who rejected the MC.

But the mega tsundere girl is really NO GOOD either. Because there's a limit to being tsundere, really. It seems she's sort of... abusive in her behaviour, and I really dislike that

I think she's still upset because Iori lied when she asked Iori to watch a movie together.

 

[Ithi]

MC seems as obnoxious as the tsundere girl.

 

[MonstaMaps]

cant wait for everyone to hate this, it get an anime adaption anyway and then watching the gigguk review

 

[cgr]

I think she's still upset because Iori lied when she asked Iori to watch a movie together.

except he didn't lie , he told her it was a big moment for him which was true

 

[retolee]

Is that 3 different blonde(?) girls with similar builds and shoulder length hair? Dialogue aside, it was visually hard to tell the girl he confessed to, the main girls friend, and the returnee (childhood friend?) girl.

 

[Nitrouse]

Is that 3 different blonde(?) girls with similar builds and shoulder length hair? Dialogue aside, it was visually hard to tell the girl he confessed to, the main girls friend, and the returnee (childhood friend?) girl.

Hiyokas friend is called Azusa while the one he confessed to was called Hiyori (Hiyoka and Hiyori.. bro had a naming sense of an Garbage Bin.. dont give Love interests similiar Names.) Its also just 2 Blonde Girls after re-reading the Whole thing.

 

[PramRamadhan]

My god is this dumb. Almost all dialogue felt like two people independently talking to wall.

even I as the translator of this manga was confused when translating, I thought it was my mistake. it turns out that's how it is from the manga regarding the conversation there. I'm also confused, even though the story is good but the execution in the manga is very lacking

 

[cgr]

@PramRamadhan​

I'm pretty sure this is translated incorrectly though:
https://mangadex.org/chapter/d0680c1a-d1ff-4538-ab66-b94af904b190/11

maybe it's 'his facial muscles... no way he could' ,

because 'my' doesn't make sense when you consider MC's reply

 

[Draig31]

I think he didn't got rejected and just jumped to the conclusion because as the blonde said, " You never listen and you haven't changed" or maybe she rejected him because she was going to move to different place as she mentioned that she just returned

 

[xKIZUKIx]

ok another trash manga I can get behind!

 

[YAMEROOO3]

First chapter and I already hate everyone