Osananananajimi - Ch. 2 - Bento

[MangaDex]

 

[HawkGoggles]

slow burn.

 

[lightingcloud]

this is so precious. also if ch. 3 isn't him going to visit her, I swear...

 

[JustAFish]

So, bro is an idiot.
"Idiots never catch a cold" as they said.

 

[Prominis]

So, bro is an idiot.
"Idiots never catch a cold" as they said.

He had to look up nostalgia, smh.

 

[Valve]

I was hoping chapter 2 would give the girls perspective, but seeing the interaction in this chapter it feels unlikely.

 

[Hicleric]

Just had a thought, why would the little sister remember her so well, if it's been several years since she came over? She doesn't seem that old

I also find myself hoping there's no marriage promise or something silly like that lurking in the background. Two people naturally coming together is waaay more interesting.

 

[UdenEmpati]

But sometimes, it still feels like we're so far apart.

Well there's something you could easily do about that, you nimrod MC
/s


This is such a slow-burn I could almost mistake it for a yuri series. But as long as no love rival is introduced and it's just the journey of them reconnecting, it should turn out amazing.

 

[Mangamoz]

She got some teasing master energy hidden in her.

 

[nxneil13]

Thx for the TL!

Man i heard of water drop torture before, but this is the first time im experiencing sugar drop torture, cus this gonna be a slow sweet burn

 

[Erbakhan]

Peak

 

[real_awh]

this is so precious. also if ch. 3 isn't him going to visit her, I swear...

The next chapter preview is literally "Next: Visiting Sumi at home...!?"

 

[ZzombieNoel]

The changing hair colour is stealing my attention

 

[MewOne]

Hnnngggh my heart is fluffy!
Thank you for the sl!

 

[ENCORAAAAAAAAA]

I was hoping chapter 2 would give the girls perspective, but seeing the interaction in this chapter it feels unlikely.

Yeah honestly things feel really one sided without it. (Even if there are small “hints” every now and then)

Would love to see the girls perspective and the guy doing something cool back with a little back and forth between them as they slowly fall in love.

Plus if this is a slow burn it would be nice if the “oh shit we’re at that age now and things are different now” moments were spread out more because it dilutes the little moments effect to constantly have them sprinkled through without the reader experiencing more deeply how they impact the characters.

(Like for example, the food the MC likes could more naturally connected to the memories he shares with the food. The FMC could still talk about how she knows after all these years but the MC could either think to himself about why he actually liked the food to begin with or why its memorable to him and show the care he feels towards FMC)

(TLDR I want to experience the memories they have rather than being told X was always like this in the past)

Tbh though no major problems. Just want more of a dual protag dynamic and a heavier emphasize on their memory and how they’ve grown and changed as people so it can be 10/10 instead of an 8/10

 

[USroflred]

inb4 ntr ending

 

[chien6497]

ugh sugar spike. Need insulin

 

[UdenEmpati]

inb4 ntr ending

why be like this.

 

[UdenEmpati]

Yeah honestly things feel really one sided without it. (Even if there are small “hints” every now and then)

Would love to see the girls perspective and the guy doing something cool back with a little back and forth between them as they slowly fall in love.

Plus if this is a slow burn it would be nice if the “oh shit we’re at that age now and things are different now” moments were spread out more because it dilutes the little moments effect to constantly have them sprinkled through without the reader experiencing more deeply how they impact the characters.

(Like for example, the food the MC likes could more naturally connected to the memories he shares with the food. The FMC could still talk about how she knows after all these years but the MC could either think to himself about why he actually liked the food to begin with or why its memorable to him and show the care he feels towards FMC)

(TLDR I want to experience the memories they have rather than being told X was always like this in the past)

Tbh though no major problems. Just want more of a dual protag dynamic and a heavier emphasize on their memory and how they’ve grown and changed as people so it can be 10/10 instead of an 8/10

"show not tell" is very much my preferred way to tell stories, especially ones that are so steeped in emotional moments rather than just narrating the events of the day or something.

An every-other-chapter swapping of "his POV" / "her POV" would be ideal, I agree - but I hope we just get her perspective on things, full stop - you gave perfect reasons so I won't try to just re-word what you've already stated.

I wonder if this is meant to be a shorter series from the outset; maybe that's why it feels "somewhat rushed" in these first two chapters? But either way, it's lovely in the moment, so I'm glad it exists.

 

[ududjeisie]

why be like this.

Its ragebait. Just ignore it