Mobile Suit Gundam Eight - Ch. 2

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Wtf? Guy puts his hand on your throat, says some mommy thing, and your response is "his hands are so warm". Is it me? Am i the autistic one here?

This feels so weird. The author baited an antagonistic relationship between the protag and his love interest for nothing. Protagonist pulls an Ayanokouji (doesn't explain why) and drops it within the chapter. Protagonist is seemingly untouchable. Nothing about the political situation besides bio-engineered humans and a need to get out of the solar system. They don't even explain why either. The pacing of this chapter is just so bad.
 
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Wtf? Guy puts his hand on your throat, says some mommy thing, and your response is "his hands are so warm". Is it me? Am i the autistic one here?
I went back and fixed it. Initially, I took it that there was warmth to his hand, meaning there was no malice behind it (you'd be cold and clammy), but I opted to rephrase it as him being 'gentle' instead. That should convey it much better. Although, to be fair, the way it's written in the (original) bubble does make it insanely ambiguous. Either his hands really are warm, or he was being gentle with her despite the outburst.
 
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Semi-lethargic MC who's secretly a badass holding back, female love interest who can't help but be interested in MC, classic political intrigue, seemingly sinister vibes from the head political leader, mobile suit combat, armed resistance group wanting to revolt against the norm. Oh yeah, we're so fucking Gundam, baby.
 
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Semi-lethargic MC who's secretly a badass holding back, female love interest who can't help but be interested in MC, classic political intrigue, seemingly sinister vibes from the head political leader, mobile suit combat, armed resistance group wanting to revolt against the norm. Oh yeah, we're so fucking Gundam, baby.

I was thinking he just went back to the past reincarnation style
 
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Wtf? Guy puts his hand on your throat, says some mommy thing, and your response is "his hands are so warm". Is it me? Am i the autistic one here?

This feels so weird. The author baited an antagonistic relationship between the protag and his love interest for nothing. Protagonist pulls an Ayanokouji (doesn't explain why) and drops it within the chapter. Protagonist is seemingly untouchable. Nothing about the political situation besides bio-engineered humans and a need to get out of the solar system. They don't even explain why either. The pacing of this chapter is just so bad.
Alas, you are in fact the autistic one here, but only marginally.
 
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So my theory was wrong I guess.. I saw the first chapter and was wondering if it was gonna be the MC returning to the past before he died at the end of chapter 1. I guess where gonna get the whole events before we reached to the events in chapter 1. So far it looks great, better than Gquuz
 

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