Yurizon - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - First Love (TBD)

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I had a bad feeling this would be one of those stories going into this and sad I was right. Way too many people dating chatbots in real life for this one to not feel gross. Not really yuri either. Art is nice and storytelling is clever, but not for me.
 
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hope this goes so well unlike raputa which so dark and got cut in few chapters
 
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This chapter is suuper good, but I'm a little worried that this is going to devolve into the two extremely needy love interests fighting over the MC while the MC remains completely oblivious.
 
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This chapter is suuper good, but I'm a little worried that this is going to devolve into the two extremely needy love interests fighting over the MC while the MC remains completely oblivious.
Same, banger first chapter like absolute wild ride, but I feel like I already see where this is going, those last 2 pages left a sour taste in my mouth. I often feel like terrible writing advice, always harping on the love triangle. Need tension but bad at writing, love triangle here to "save" the day.

Forced love triangles(or other shapes with even more sides) because the author can't think of any other conflict has made me drop more romance stories than I can count.
 

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