Arakure Ojousama wa Monmon Shiteiru - Ch. 51 - My love has shown itself in the color of my face

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Thanks for translating! You're doing a pretty good job with regular updates.

There are some parts ive been wondering about tho

When Yarino says "We took the courage to come and eat together", isn't it "THEY took the courage to come and eat together" referring to Tadashi and Tsubaki?

And when Tsubaki says "I started to think that maybe he's after my body" isnt it "I started to think I'M after YOUR body?" Referring to Tsubaki's whole dilemma these past chapters?

I know japanese pronouns can be unclear, but it feels like both would make more sense giving the context of what's happening
 
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THANK YOU FOR THE TRANSLATION MY GOAT!!!
I think in page 18, where she says "he's just after my body", a more apt translation might be that "I'm just after your body", since she's self conscious about the fact that she's lusting after him. (Source: I tried reading the raws for a couple of chapters a while back)

Other than that, I think you got the overall gist of things the past couple of chapters and I'm super glad to be seeing this manga again.
 
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@MaroFour You're doing an excellent job. One big suggestion is, could you use the more typical manga scanlation font? idk what it is, but it's when the letters are in all caps. The normal case is kind of...not exactly easy on the eyes. There's other little things but I will leave it at the font choice.

Otherwise, yeah, super happy we are getting chapters! Progress!
 
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...Tadashi looks like he's about to keel over and die (faint).

It's not even being shy or embarrassed or anything like that, it's outright being tensed up, like a trauma response. From admitting he wants to kiss her. That can't be normal, even for how "uptight" he is. What the hell happened to him?
 
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Thanks for translating! You're doing a pretty good job with regular updates.

There are some parts ive been wondering about tho

When Yarino says "We took the courage to come and eat together", isn't it "THEY took the courage to come and eat together" referring to Tadashi and Tsubaki?

And when Tsubaki says "I started to think that maybe he's after my body" isnt it "I started to think I'M after YOUR body?" Referring to Tsubaki's whole dilemma these past chapters?

I know japanese pronouns can be unclear, but it feels like both would make more sense giving the context of what's happening
Thank you so much for your comment, i aways make sure to douple or triple check the translation to see if there's any coherency mistakes like that but it seems that i got a bit confused. Thank's for your help and i'll be updating it asap! >.<
 
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@MaroFour You're doing an excellent job. One big suggestion is, could you use the more typical manga scanlation font? idk what it is, but it's when the letters are in all caps. The normal case is kind of...not exactly easy on the eyes. There's other little things but I will leave it at the font choice.

Otherwise, yeah, super happy we are getting chapters! Progress!
Sure i'll be researching more fonts, thank you for your suggestion. I'll try to bring more quality for the next chapters as well :3
 
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THANK YOU FOR THE TRANSLATION MY GOAT!!!
I think in page 18, where she says "he's just after my body", a more apt translation might be that "I'm just after your body", since she's self conscious about the fact that she's lusting after him. (Source: I tried reading the raws for a couple of chapters a while back)

Other than that, I think you got the overall gist of things the past couple of chapters and I'm super glad to be seeing this manga again.
Thank you!! Updated =^.^=
 
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Sure i'll be researching more fonts, thank you for your suggestion. I'll try to bring more quality for the next chapters as well :3
Awesome! https://studio.lemoon.io/en/12-best-fonts-for-webtoons-and-manga - these top fonts here (action man, comic book, anime ace) are more along the lines of what i was thinking about, to be specific.

And yeah, Raydnt's tips about pronouns were gonna be my only other suggestions, so if you clear those up in addition to the font changes, I think it'd be near perfect. Thanks again
 
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anyone else dart their eyes to the page count bar to confirm it wasnt going to be cliff hanger
 

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