Yane no Shita no Artemis - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Astronomical Observatory

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Why are they introducing another character to knock him around before properly establishing his dynamic with Kobachi?
Romance can't strive without love struggle. I haven't seen a romance manga without a love rival. I think introducing the third party early on is a rather good move. It feels abrupt when they pop up mid-way, like where tf were they all along?
 
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I was actually pleasantly surprised that they managed to have a decent exchange.
It wasn't just the MC one-sidedly declaring he will manage her life and make her succeed. The FMC rightfully and assertively said that would be embarrassing/humiliating and she'll try to manage it on her own.

I love that attitude! She's not just a damsel doll that the MC has to protect and push to the finish line to stroke his ego and boost his self-confidence.
I am so so so fucking happy just because of that one interaction.

Here's to hoping this actually becomes a really good series 🤞
 
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I was actually pleasantly surprised that they managed to have a decent exchange.
It wasn't just the MC one-sidedly declaring he will manage her life and make her succeed. The FMC rightfully and assertively said that would be embarrassing/humiliating and she'll try to manage it on her own.

I love that attitude! She's not just a damsel doll that the MC has to protect and push to the finish line to stroke his ego and boost his self-confidence.
I am so so so fucking happy just because of that one interaction.

Here's to hoping this actually becomes a really good series 🤞
Sometimes people just want to help. It’s not always out of selfishness
 
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Sometimes people just want to help. It’s not always out of selfishness
You seem to be missing the point. I am not against people wanting to help others. In fact, that is a lovely thing.

The MC just straight up declares "I will manage your life" without even asking or consulting with the person in question. That is wrong and he rightfully gets shot down for it. You offer to help, you don't force your "help" down others' throats. That is what I am pointing out.
 
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You seem to be missing the point. I am not against people wanting to help others. In fact, that is a lovely thing.

The MC just straight up declares "I will manage your life" without even asking or consulting with the person in question. That is wrong and he rightfully gets shot down for it. You offer to help, you don't force your "help" down others' throats. That is what I am pointing out.
It’s because you mentioned stroking his ego. I agree with the rest
 

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