Sawaranaide Kotesashi-kun - Vol. 4 Ch. 29 - The Vice-Principal is maintaining the public order

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"After I massage someone's body I never forget it" might sound bullshit, but as a masseur in training I can tell you that there's actually some truth to this. While it's definitely not to the point of Ollivander knowing every fucking wand he has ever sold, people's bodies, tattoos, birthmarks, freckles, and especially places where their muscles are especially tense do tend to stick with you.

So that's a fun little thing.
 
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Wording I would change:
Page 7: I'll take the risk
Page 10, panel 3: I think these
Page 13, panel 3, bubble 3: It must be a habit of yours to cross your legs regularly
Page 15, panel 1, bubble 2: Since on that day you had not tied up your hair (This feels weird to read. She obviously has her hair up now - a day since that time - so why would it says the opposite?)
 
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Wording I would change:
Page 7: I'll take the risk
Page 10, panel 3: I think these
Page 13, panel 3, bubble 3: It must be a habit of yours to cross your legs regularly
Page 15, panel 1, bubble 2: Since on that day you had not tied up your hair (This feels weird to read. She obviously has her hair up now - a day since that time - so why would it says the opposite?)
Thank you, it should be fixed now
 

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