@KingoRodriguo
Wording I would change:
Page 7: I'll
take the risk
Page 10, panel 3: I think
these
Page 13, panel 3, bubble 3: It must be a habit of
yours to cross your legs regularly
Page 15, panel 1, bubble 2: Since
on that day you had not tied up your hair
(This feels weird to read. She obviously has her hair up now - a day since that time - so why would it says the opposite?)