Erika Won't Back Down - Vol. 2 Ch. 7 - Smell of The Game

Group Leader
Joined
Dec 20, 2024
Messages
58
This is probably THE chapter where you have to actually go back reread chapter 4 lol.
I hope you enjoyed the bit of revelation of a certain character :>
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Apr 3, 2024
Messages
1,691
Oh wow, surprise chapter, thanks a lot, it reminds me that...I honestly forgot a lot of details and all these names just go by my head, I will have to re-read it, wish I wasnt reading it in a hurry, so I will have to give it a proper look.
Thanks for not making the cliffhanger Erika having heart problems but instead a more comical one with her kick.

typo in page 8, panel left second bubble.
 
Active member
Joined
Mar 9, 2025
Messages
43
i hope you are a guy who makes good endings author.because this? sorry but it screams bad ending.am i too paronoid?SORRY BUT İ CANT FOCUS SİNCE THE GİRL HAVE CANCER AND THE GUY İS LİTERALLY SERİAL KİLLER
 
Active member
Joined
Mar 9, 2025
Messages
43
This is probably THE chapter where you have to actually go back reread chapter 4 lol.
I hope you enjoyed the bit of revelation of a certain character :>
mr author do you have any other works do you have? i am trying to find out your style here
 
Group Leader
Joined
Dec 20, 2024
Messages
58
Oh wow, surprise chapter, thanks a lot, it reminds me that...I honestly forgot a lot of details and all these names just go by my head, I will have to re-read it, wish I wasnt reading it in a hurry, so I will have to give it a proper look.
Thanks for not making the cliffhanger Erika having heart problems but instead a more comical one with her kick.

typo in page 8, panel left second bubble.
Ah yeah, i always forgot to make a character page for web uploads. Ngl can't blame you for forgetting names and details, considering the inconsistency of the uploads.

I can't spot the typo tho, can you screenshot it?
 
Group Leader
Joined
Dec 20, 2024
Messages
58
i hope you are a guy who makes good endings author.because this? sorry but it screams bad ending.am i too paronoid?SORRY BUT İ CANT FOCUS SİNCE THE GİRL HAVE CANCER AND THE GUY İS LİTERALLY SERİAL KİLLER
I'm currently cooking how to make the ending to not be too much of a bullshit or feel like deus ex machina lol. My favorite anime ending of all time is FMAB, and on the polar opposite is Requiem for The Phantom.
I can understand your paranoia, though!

On another one, my other work is called "gott Ist Tot". It's a R18 paid only doujinshi, though.
https://x.com/sakiyume11/status/1999102517964329408?s=20 WARNING R18
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Apr 3, 2024
Messages
1,691
Ah yeah, i always forgot to make a character page for web uploads. Ngl can't blame you for forgetting names and details, considering the inconsistency of the uploads.

I can't spot the typo tho, can you screenshot it?
"BUT I SUGGEST YOU INVESITGATE" The typo is in INVESITGATE instead of INVESTIGATE

Also...wait a second, page 22, is that PAPYRUS?
 
Active member
Joined
May 1, 2025
Messages
88
"BUT I SUGGEST YOU INVESITGATE" The typo is in INVESITGATE instead of INVESTIGATE

Also...wait a second, page 22, is that PAPYRUS
awh man..
i thought you meant undertale papyrus :(
undertale__papyrus_sprite_by_thepixelater_d9flw76-fullview.jpg
 
Group Leader
Joined
Dec 20, 2024
Messages
58
"BUT I SUGGEST YOU INVESITGATE" The typo is in INVESITGATE instead of INVESTIGATE

Also...wait a second, page 22, is that PAPYRUS?
Aight thanks!
I totally missed that one lol, you really have eagle eye!
I actually forgot whether it was papyrus or not, the font is already rasterized and can't be checked :p
 
Group Leader
Joined
Dec 20, 2024
Messages
58
Shit, at this rate i really couldn't use old Fallout songs for a chapter that focuses on both Erika and Rio lol
 
Active member
Joined
Mar 9, 2025
Messages
43
I'm currently cooking how to make the ending to not be too much of a bullshit or feel like deus ex machina lol. My favorite anime ending of all time is FMAB, and on the polar opposite is Requiem for The Phantom.
I can understand your paranoia, though!

On another one, my other work is called "gott Ist Tot". It's a R18 paid only doujinshi, though.
https://x.com/sakiyume11/status/1999102517964329408?s=20 WARNING R18
not to make a pressure author but just for you knowing i will definitely depressed for a month if one of them dies:( anyway keep up the good word i support you
 
Last edited:

Users who are viewing this thread

Top