This would probably hit harder if we saw more of the prosperity and how it was actually built on innocent sacrifices. Like in this monologue she says what feels like for the first time "this dark magic started this nation, then some light magic users took over. innocent sacrifice." Like how many dark magic users were there actually? How did they get sacrificed? Why did they actually get discriminated against in the first place (cause like, some light magic user got into power and everyone for some reason secretly hated dark magic users and now they get shunned?)? How did any of this actually come about? I really wish there was more time to be spent to actually delve into these cause it's not a very satisfying explanation of things.That so-called prosperity was built on innocent sacrifices
It’s rushed, is what it is. The concept could work, but it needed more time to land with any impact.This would probably hit harder if we saw more of the prosperity and how it was actually built on innocent sacrifices. Like in this monologue she says what feels like for the first time "this dark magic started this nation, then some light magic users took over. innocent sacrifice." Like how many dark magic users were there actually? How did they get sacrificed? Why did they actually get discriminated against in the first place (cause like, some light magic user got into power and everyone for some reason secretly hated dark magic users and now they get shunned?)? How did any of this actually come about? I really wish there was more time to be spent to actually delve into these cause it's not a very satisfying explanation of things.
I feel like that'd be the point of discussion next chapter, it's a big point to overlook.Thank you for the chapter!
Sadly, Nova's decision leads nowhere, destroying everything is easy and then restarting the process might seem like a good idea at first, but then what if it repeats itself. I think there was even a story somewhere where a goddess kept taking over bodies and restarting the development of the world because every time, she was unsatisfied with the results.
Congrats. Now we wait.I CAUGHT UP HHAHAHA. thank you for translating some of those chapters after pretty steamy cliff hangers. Ah useless lesbians.
Axed, 2 chapters to go.This got axed, didn't it? Ahhhh, really could've gotten a cool story if given the chance to develop. Rip
Ahhh, I knew it. Really had so much potential, I can't believe another was lost to the axe, so many stories with great setting and story gets destroyed by the axeAxed, 2 chapters to go.