Shigoto Kaeri, Dokushin no Bijin Joushi ni Tanomarete - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

[popo53414]

 

[Grug16]

bro wtf how could u not hard for her

He just explained. Forced to think about how he lost the thing he wanted most in life and will never have his own success.

 

[UdenEmpati]

bro wtf how could u not hard for her

Reading the chapter often explains what happened in the chapter.

 

[CAVEdude123]

bro wtf how could u not hard for her

Oh man if only there was a way for us READers to know on what happened THIS CHAPTER. Perhaps the author should explain to us using WORDS. Preferably using an easy to digest format, like a MANGA.

 

[Septazia]

Thank you kindly for picking this up, by the way there at page 20 there is blurry text on the top right.

 

[trapesiumz]

kek this place has no chill

 

[trapesiumz]

Oh man if only there was a way for us READers to know on what happened THIS CHAPTER. Perhaps the author should explain to us using WORDS. Preferably using an easy to digest format, like a MANGA.

chill my dude ofc I know what's happening I just dont like how the author keeps blue balling the mc

 

[UdenEmpati]

chill my dude ofc I know what's happening I just dont like how the author keeps blue balling the mc

Well it is an actual story with plot and narrative tension, not simple hentai. So.

Also what do you mean "keeps blue balling", they've banged more than once already.

 

[ariff]

 

[blablablub]

 

[crossface]

Going forward you might want to have another person proofread the chapter as well. There's a lot of grammatical errors throughout the chapter, as well as missing letters or using the wrong tense for the inflection.

It's competent enough you can sus out what everyone is saying but it doesn't make for a pleasant reading experience overall.

 

[trapesiumz]

Well it is an actual story with plot and narrative tension, not simple hentai. So.

Also what do you mean "keeps blue balling", they've banged more than once already.

nobody coparing this with a "simple hentai" and I can name some that has an actual story with plot and narrative tension. What I mean by blue balling is the mc character development. We all know about his inferiority complex since day 1 but somehow it persist or even got worse. Y'know it feels like we're getting negative progression which is frustrating kek.

 

[ITSigno]

Hello, thank you for the feedback. Honestly, I’m not sure why there are some blue tints, since everything looked perfectly fine before I uploaded the chapter. It might be related to the source files I used, but I’m not entirely certain. For now, I hope you can bear with it for at least the next four chapters, as I don’t have enough time to redo the chapters that are already finished. However, if future chapters still have blue tints to the point that they affect the reading experience, I’ll fix them as soon as possible.

Are you doing some upscaling on these? It's not just the odd bit of blue, there are patches odd mismatched screentones.

 

[UdenEmpati]

nobody coparing this with a "simple hentai" and I can name some that has an actual story with plot and narrative tension. What I mean by blue balling is the mc character development. We all know about his inferiority complex since day 1 but somehow it persist or even got worse. Y'know it feels like we're getting negative progression which is frustrating kek.

Well you didn't qualify it as "narrative blue balling" in the first place so you'll have to forgive me making assumptions when a good chunk of your comments on this entire site are demands and requests that characters "reproduce".

 

[trapesiumz]

Well you didn't qualify it as "narrative blue balling" in the first place so you'll have to forgive me making assumptions when a good chunk of your comments on this entire site are demands and requests that characters "reproduce".

indeed my comments are not to be taken seriously I'm just goofing around but some people take everything too seriously which saddens me.

 

[InstaWill]

Oh boy. He won't man up and just ask her, so now he will be out and about, see her with a man somewhere and begin to spiral harder. She'll see him see her or he'll ask about the man at some point and she will say it was like a work lunch ordeal but it will be a huge drama point yada yada yada. Just a guess but that's usually how these mangas build tension up. Sorry in advance if I correctly guess the plot!