Dex-chan lover
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- May 23, 2019
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Such good author. Reeling, luring, baiting, but still can give that satisfaction in-between frustrations for the readers.
I would also like to see some progress there. Pretty sure they made plans to go eat at a buffet together and guy had no idea that she liked him.I think it's a nice break/balance, surprised we haven't gotten a subplot of another hookup like those two diner staff/waiter/waitress
I wish I could think that fast under pressure
Its fixed, no need for any discouragement.p.6 "thought" something tells me it should be "though"
p.10 "the", the same "they"
p.15 "good out", seriously?
you still don't have pr/qa, huh
mind games through half of the chapter
that skip skip skip on p.31 was pretty cute
nice ass...
Its fixed, no need for any discouragement.