Musume no Shinshitsu - Vol. 3 Ch. 15 - Proof of Love

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New here. Been following the comments for this trainwreck. Got curious and read some. Have questions now:

Why the hell do you keep using quotation marks? And why is it so goddamn random? It’s honestly difficult to tell if it’s a character speaking their own words or them paraphrasing. Like last chapter I has no idea if it was the husband speaking for himself or him trying to finish what the wife was saying.

I’m so curious as to why you do this
 
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I feel like the real twist will be Moe is his daughter, though I imagine he could simply recall if it would make logistic sense.
(Or, y'know, see if he could get a paternity test off his and Moe's DNA (just hair from a shower drain or something - a cheek swab would be better, but it would depend on Moe being in the know, and being willing) - but yeah.)
Just feels like the sort of revelation that would hit Maximum Drama Points for what this series is trying to do.

Ken needs to be made aware that, whatever he chooses to do, that family is fucked and he should not be trying to force it back together like this.
 
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New here. Been following the comments for this trainwreck. Got curious and read some. Have questions now:

Why the hell do you keep using quotation marks? And why is it so goddamn random? It’s honestly difficult to tell if it’s a character speaking their own words or them paraphrasing. Like last chapter I has no idea if it was the husband speaking for himself or him trying to finish what the wife was saying.

I’m so curious as to why you do this
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it's my first time doing this work so no idea how to do
 
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Uh so, he thinks shes not blood related and alright to fuck? Go for it man. And 5 times? Damn. :pepehmm:
There is also the fact that she's been doing it since their marriage pretty much. She only got pregnant that many times over 20 years. Absolutely insane behavior. It can't be simply explained by "i married young so i've been chasing my missed out youth ever since"
 
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I'm telling y'all, if she just aborts her current illegitimate child and has the father's child instead , it's not that bad.
 
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New here. Been following the comments for this trainwreck. Got curious and read some. Have questions now:

Why the hell do you keep using quotation marks? And why is it so goddamn random? It’s honestly difficult to tell if it’s a character speaking their own words or them paraphrasing. Like last chapter I has no idea if it was the husband speaking for himself or him trying to finish what the wife was saying.

I’m so curious as to why you do this

i and other commenters said before on their other series, i think it's better to not have quotation marks at all unless the original series do so (altho jp quotation marks look slightly diff in raws but i think it's possible it's some kinda mtl tool or so that doesn't remove the quotes bc another site had one person doing something similar)
 

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