Tenchou to Mujikakuna Tennin - Vol. 2 Ch. 40

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its better than absolutely nothing so thank you for that but i think a little more time should be spent on checking the grammar and whos referring to who because it does make it a little confusing
 
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its better than absolutely nothing so thank you for that but i think a little more time should be spent on checking the grammar and whos referring to who because it does make it a little confusing
Yeah, I meant to put a note on the end page saying it might take me a chapter or two to adjust to the different type of dialogue, as I’m used to stuff that’s a little more straightforward. I think the second chapter is a lot better than the first, which even I’ll admit wasn’t the greatest in terms of what you’re referring to.
 
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I reworked some of the dialog to hopefully be a little more clear about who's being referred to. Thanks to @yummyyummy for pointing this out. Since I work by myself, I don't have multiple people involved that some groups have, so QC issues like this happen sometimes, even though I try to catch them all. So if you see an error, just tell me in the comments, as I check them for a day or two after chapters release.
 
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Thanks for doing this, but I would strongly recommend finding a native English speaker as a proofreader. This can be hard to read at points.
 
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Thank you for the chapter.
Small typo on page 4, top left cell: "Now that I think about it... Back when I was in kindergarden" --> "Now that I think about it... Back when SHE was in kindergarden". I'm retty sure she was the one in kindergarden, not him :)
 
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Thank you for the chapter.
Small typo on page 4, top left cell: "Now that I think about it... Back when I was in kindergarden" --> "Now that I think about it... Back when SHE was in kindergarden". I'm retty sure she was the one in kindergarden, not him :)
I’ll get that fixed. In response to other comments: I am a native English speaker, and I have limitations on the TL. The TL improves after this chapter, though.
 

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