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Really should'a ganked all the shite in that room; again, I feel like this author is constantly having the MC ignore the fact that he has Skill: Alchemy.
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Fuckin-A!
Great Proofreading; 10/10
You're in a room full of weapons and armour, and your literal "Primary Job Ability" is to reform, reshape, and endow abilities to inanimate objects... including, and specifically, weapons and armour!
All of which can be conveniently stored in an Inventory, and is in a room so unused as to be forgotten! Hell, the room even has a magical seal on the ceiling that hasn't been noticed in so long that the room is ridiculously full of dust; no way anybody will miss that stuff, and MC could have really put it to good use.
It's just a kind of dumb oversight that makes the story seem insulting to the reader's intelligence; any one of us would take the stolen merchandise, whether to return it, improve and sell it, or simply because gamers are pack-rats (Eldar Scrolls Syndrome), and having the MC just ignore that stuff when he has every reason in the known universe to take much-if-not-all of it is simply too much to swallow.
It's a stupid ask for us to believe it, and that's the author's job: get us to believe their story enough to enjoy reading it.
All of which can be conveniently stored in an Inventory, and is in a room so unused as to be forgotten! Hell, the room even has a magical seal on the ceiling that hasn't been noticed in so long that the room is ridiculously full of dust; no way anybody will miss that stuff, and MC could have really put it to good use.
It's just a kind of dumb oversight that makes the story seem insulting to the reader's intelligence; any one of us would take the stolen merchandise, whether to return it, improve and sell it, or simply because gamers are pack-rats (Eldar Scrolls Syndrome), and having the MC just ignore that stuff when he has every reason in the known universe to take much-if-not-all of it is simply too much to swallow.
It's a stupid ask for us to believe it, and that's the author's job: get us to believe their story enough to enjoy reading it.
Dont @ me, bro.
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Also:
Fuckin-A!
Great Proofreading; 10/10
