Shigotogaeri, Dokushin no Bijin Joushi ni Tanomarete - Vol. 3 Ch. 15

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That was way too forced. There was zero reason they couldn't have had that conversation at her apartment in the scene before. As dumb as this sounds, it would have been, better for the sperm test to have happened at work. The conversation happens and then coworker overhears them. Action > consequence.

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And mangaka had to add the third wheel nobody asked.
i concur, this bullshit that's going to come is not welcome nor needed at all, this is supposed to be manga about adults not some schoolkid bs romcom.
That was way too forced. There was zero reason they couldn't have had that conversation at her apartment in the scene before. As dumb as it is it would have been, it would be better for the sperm test to have happened at work, and then this conversation and the worker found out. Action > consequence.
Yes!, them doing that lore dump just like that at work?, nah, i call bullshit on that, totally forced bs.
that conversation in the storage room was so weird, who the fuck talks like that?!
no one, that was forced bullshit by the author to justify the lore dump.
 
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You'd think she would have asked for a test much sooner considering that's her whole purpose for this set up...

I found it pretty funny how she takes such care to fold his pants and place then neatly aside.
 
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Lets exposition dump in this random place so this hoe can cause drama. Why yes, this is my first time writing a romcom, how did you know?
 

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