Ah yeah, cheeky brat elf lolibaba. A magic maniac vs MC, a battle maniac who loves creating new magic. And Rei’s expression here really looked like Saitama when he fought Boros, just completely deadpan, except when MC read Nova’s letter. MC’s dad also looked kinda scared when MC apologized for fighting Nova, lol
I think its fine. it fits the scene even moreI changed the meaning a bit on page 8, which was originally "Weakling" to "Silly boy". For some reason, the dialogue fits better
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I mean, if the next scene is him saying she "turned into a cheeky brat," "Loser" is probably the way to go. Especially if she said "zako"I changed the meaning a bit on page 8, which was originally "Weakling" to "Silly boy". For some reason, the dialogue fits better
If it's not quite suitable, you can give suggestions so I can correct it again
Would bet money on the other 3 being OG protagonist, OG protagonist's childhood friend and some villainess type character from the original novel that current MC will befriendThe new protagonist is going to be one of those four I bet
We need more shoujo protags in shonen/isekai!! Make these niggas cute man , I hate virgin otaku’s with bowl cutsI've been thinking about it for a while but mc has some beautiful eyelashes