GraPara! - Ch. 132 - Fumi’s Breasts (Censored)

[whorainzone]

But the thing is if he did it would partially restore the premise of the story it's part romance it'd be stupid but would work.

If that happens than yeah everything i can say is lame writing. Than she really just went with slutkura fucked someone, shinobu fucked someone they are even = they can get b ack together.. wow

 

[box2024]

They will meet (probably) but i hope slutkura will see shinobu arm in arm with fumi.

Yes but what would that change? She has no regrets.

 

[box2024]

If that happens than yeah everything i can say is lame writing. Than she really just went with slutkura fucked someone, shinobu fucked someone they are even = they can get b ack together.. wow

That might work for most readers but would also be pointless at this point in the story.

 

[Alsatia]

It doesnt matter how it goes somewhere its pointless. Shinobu rejecting fumi and going back to slutkura = pointless she got fucked the premise is dead. Whats she gonna do? keep goign with the baits? damn so exciting. Shinobu ends up with fumi = the same thing. 129 shouldnt happen and you could milk this story for years more and it wouldnt get boring for many people. But like this? anything will be boring after the drama.

This really hammers in my idea that all we see when it came to 128 and 129 was if 129 didn't happen at all. We cut off from 128 and cut to the morning with Shinobu and Fumi.

That would have had the stakes and anticipation of the bait. "Did she? Did she not?" And it wouldn't have been revealed till much later.

I really think they will never meet again because Arir doesn't know what that conversation would even look like.

They're definitely going to meet again. The fact this misunderstanding is unresolved is a stupid decision even for Airi. I'll trust on something cooking on this.

We wouldn't want to keep having bad tastes (Yuma cum) in our mouths right?? We need a resolution. Even if they stay separated we need that resolution. Which is why my desires ending is Shinobu and Fumi dating but still supporting a single Sakura.

 

[box2024]

This really hammers in my idea that all we see when it came to 128 and 129 was if 129 didn't happen at all. We cut off from 128 and cut to the morning with Shinobu and Fumi.

That would have had the stakes and anticipation of the bait. "Did she? Did she not?" And it wouldn't have been revealed till much later.

They're definitely going to meet again. The fact this misunderstanding is unresolved is a stupid decision even for Airi. I'll trust on something cooking on this.

We wouldn't want to keep having bad tastes (Yuma cum) in our mouths right?? We need a resolution. Even if they stay separated we need that resolution. Which is why my desires ending is Shinobu and Fumi dating but still supporting a single Sakura.

Yes but what happens when the misunderstanding is resolved? Why dose it matter at this point what dose it change between them?

See my problem?

 

[box2024]

Agawa and gotou are having not sex sex.lol

 

[Wyrm666]

Just to add that is perfectly possible that fuccboi loses and Sakura regrets and they still end up together in happy relationship. It would take skill to make that make sense, but it would be possible.

Hold my beer...

Nagi and Sakura meet for tea. Nagi is sad hearing Sakura and Shinobu are no longer together. She tells Sakura that she always thought they would be forever. Sakura says that she thought that too, but Shinobu threw that away. Nagi can't believe it, she asks Sakura if Shinobu really said that... Sakura has no answer, but look at the time, she has to go.

A seed was planted.

Nagi looks for Shinobu. When she meets him, Fumi is there. She thinks Shinobu did betray Sakura, and let's them have it. Fumi tries to reac but Shinobu stops her. He just confirms everything Nagi is saying and Nagi leaves angry.

Fumi meets Nagi. She wanted to make things clear. She doesn't want Nagi to think less of Shinobu. He tells her of the misunderstanding and that Shinobu found comfort in her arms months after the break up. Nagi sees the big picture.

In the set Nagi sees Sakura and fuccboi. They are an item and recently became official. Sakura smiles but her eyes have a shadow when no one's looking. Nagi goes to her in her final day of shooting. She just tells her that it's a pity that two people who once loved each other so much have parted ways due to not facing each other in the crucial moments.

Sakura's bubble finally shatters. She thinks of fuccboi, she does have feelings for him after so many months, but she has to talk to Shinobu. She starts spiraling because, "why didn't I faced a man who always loved me unconditionally."

She finally goes after Shinobu. She learns that he is dating Fumi. She assumes that he did indeed betray her. But finally she has grown. She wants to hear it from Shinobu. She wants to know what happened all those months ago. Fumi learns that Sakura wants to meet Shinobu. She is afraid. Shinobu tells her that Sakura has send him a message wanting to meet. Fumi doesn't want him to go. Shinobu apologises but he needs to see it through. She let's him go. But she breaks down crying as he leaves.

They meet. They talk about their careers, how far they went. Finally Sakura asks him the question. He says she was right, he was going to leave her, he was dating Fumi. Becuase he wants to set her free. Sakura hears it, hardens her heart and leaves.

As Shinobu is walking away, tears falling down is eyes, Sakura grabs her arm. Because as she was leaving she realizes that Shinobu would confirm what she asked regardless of the truth because he wanted her to be happy and she was in a good place.

Shinobu breaks down. The truth starts to come out. They can't make a scene in the street so they go to a love hotel. fuccboi was following Sakura, and he sees them entering. He can't believe it.

In the room, Shinobu and Sakura finally talk about the break up. Sakura finally learns the truth. She spirals once again, but Shinobu says that it doesn't matter. It's not her fault, she did what she needed to do with what she knew. But Sakura drops the "i never stopped loving you" bomb. Starts undressing and takes the initiative.

Shinobu let's himself go but eventually he makes her stop. He is with Fumi now, and can't do that to her. Sakura asks him if he stopped loving her. Shinobu doesn't answer. He simply says that they both have different lives now, they are both on the path to their dreams and he is happy that he contributed to Sakura's. He wishes all the best.

Sakura cries, she was the one that destroyed what they have.
As Shinobu leaves he is confronted by fuccboi. "what have you done to Sakura" "how dare you showing yourself to her" Shinobu just pushes him away and leaves. he has nothing to say to him.

Later Sakura leaves the hotel and fuccboi is still there. Sakura says that she learned the truth. She says that it wasn't his place to tell Shinobu anything, that she can't look at him now. and leaves. fuccboi is left there.

Shinobu returns home Fumi is nowhere to be seen. He decides to work on his next project. Fumi will star in it. In the early morning, Fumi arrives. Shinobu is there and she flabbergasted. I thought... shinobu smiles and says, it's done. now I'm completely free. She falls down crying.... "i-i i thought you left" Shinobu simply smiles at her... She tries to say that she went for drinks and something had happened... But Shinobu says yesterday doesn't matter. And they watch the sunrise together.

Sakura feels like a worthless woman. Days later she finally relents to a director that wanted to give her a part in exchange for some "private guidance." She gets the part. fuccboi goes to her. The director had told him that Sakura got the part due to her impressive skills, that fuccboi had taught her well, subtext is obvious. He breaks down, he apologizes, he tells her how much he loves her, that he did all he could the way he knew how to make her happy.

Sakura relents. they take it slow from there. She thinks about everything that has happened. How things turned out to be. She decides to leave the past and face the future.

Epilogue
Shifumi get married in a very public ceremony. It was years later and there is a little Shinobu with them.

SaFucc are invited to the wedding. They greet the newlyweds. It's clear that they are not close friends, but there is no bad blood.

The end.

This ending, plus side character resolutions would allow for 15 to 20 chapters more. There are plugs for cliffhangers and NTR baits. It still feels like a KA ending because of the unnecessary fuckery going on.

This was my 20m creative writing exercise.

Sorry, I was bored.

 

[Alsatia]

Yes but what happens when the misunderstanding is resolved? Why dose it matter at this point what dose it change between them?

See my problem?

Closure.
They just cannot ever meet again. I can't see it happening.

For all this to happen because of a misunderstanding and for it to not be resolved is just shit writing. We won't have Sakura realize her fuck up. She's happy for now but how long will that last? We have to wait and see!

 

[box2024]

Closure.
They just cannot ever meet again. I can't see it happening.

For all this to happen because of a misunderstanding and for it to not be resolved is just shit writing. We won't have Sakura realize her fuck up. She's happy for now but how long will that last? We have to wait and see!

Them meeting isn't my problem what is supposed to happen after that meeting are they supposed to be friends again? Just move on? What what is the point of closure how is shinobu supposed to respond to I thought your were cheating on me so I fucked this guy!

 

[Xain]

I honestly dont want Shinobu and Fumi to be a thing before that Sakura confrontation, otherwise if Sakura sees them together, it might make her seem validated. I need her to suffer thinking that Shinobu never fucked anyone in all those months while she was jumping on that d without any hesitation even though he was innocent. And THEN he can properly get her out of his heart during this confrontation and tell her that their love story is finished and he is now moving on with Fumi and focusing on HIS career instead of prioritizing Sakura's like before.

 

[box2024]

I honestly dont want Shinobu and Fumi to be a thing before that Sakura confrontation, otherwise if Sakura sees them together, it might make her seem validated. I need her to suffer thinking that Shinobu never fucked anyone in all those months while she was jumping on that d without any hesitation even though he was innocent. And THEN he can properly get her out of his heart during this confrontation and tell her that their love story is finished and he is now moving on with Fumi and focusing on HIS career instead of prioritizing Sakura's like before.

Yes everyone wants Sakura to show some regret but she will most certainly end the story with fuckboi so even that would change nothing.

 

[diphuc1]

Yes everyone wants Sakura to show some regret but she will most certainly end the story with fuckboi so even that would change nothing.

Don't be so sure with Airi's writing. Everyone wanted Akaneya to win and Iida to go away but that never happened. We're still making heavily evidenced speculation but until we see fucboi again or Sakura mentions it in her conversation with Nagi later we don't know their current relationship.

 

[box2024]

Guys I'm really sick of cuck shit are korean and Japanese men complete pussys?

 

[Xain]

At this point I dont care who Shinobu ends up with, I just want fuckboi to lose

 

[box2024]

At this point I dont care who Shinobu ends up with, I just want fuckboi to lose

At this point I need the uncensored chapter.

 

[Xain]

At this point I need the uncensored chapter.

Wish and you shall receive

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/17TMVSDKugX-KX9JvVII_7pFWHYdnv9yY

 

[Xain]

Wish and you shall receive

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/17TMVSDKugX-KX9JvVII_7pFWHYdnv9yY

The coloured parts are so damn good

 

[whorainzone]

Don't be so sure with Airi's writing. Everyone wanted Akaneya to win and Iida to go away but that never happened. We're still making heavily evidenced speculation but until we see fucboi again or Sakura mentions it in her conversation with Nagi later we don't know their current relationship.

Going again after that logic just means shinobu will end up with an npc and neither with slutkura or fumi.

 

[whorainzone]

The coloured parts are so damn good

holy

 

[diphuc1]

Going again after that logic just means shinobu will end up with an npc and neither with slutkura or fumi.

Not meant to be translated 1:1, also that was in one of the hentai version spinoffs rather than the manga. I doubt Shinobu is going to get the npc treatment, it's down to Fumi or Sakura.