Thanks for pointing this out, makes much more sense now

Uploaded the corrected version.
Also, sorry to bother but do you perhaps have any suggestions on how to better translate what "なんて" is doing in the first bubble?
[お弁当なんて何回だって]
Afaik it functions as a dismissive particle for the bento, so I thought of changing the last part to "bento, of all things", but it would make the whole sentence too long for typesetting.