Honestly, the artist has such an amazing aesthetic sense and style it seems a bit of a shame to be distracted by certain facets of the, er, plot
Like, the flowing line work I could easily imagine accompanying a lyrical fantasy in a shoujo publication. Something that elevates the source material where the medium really is the massage (sic).
Not to say I won't read this one for the art tho. I appreciate the author's bold meta moves in incorporating their own work and calling out genre tropes, so if they keep it up it should be a fun read.