Houkago Teibou Nisshi - Vol. 11 Ch. 65 - President Kuroiwa

[MangaDex]

 

[sk4ij]

Thanks for the chapter mate

 

[Fugutron]

should mark this as a momentous occasion lads, the first time male students appear in this manga lol

 

[Boy_PIPIN]

Thanks for the chapter... damn she is hot

 

[amaniza2010]

Yeah ...... some time i wish i have place to go like that on my motocycle

 

[Pinbat]

should mark this as a momentous occasion lads, the first time male students appear in this manga lol

tezuka and the other (male) handicraft club members showed up for a tiny bit in an early chapter, but yeah first interactions i think

 

[ciera]

Thank you for the chapter

 

[Exkalamity]

Wait is Prez's name Yuuki or Nozomi? The envelope is adressed to Kuroiwa Nozomi but her brother calls her Yuuki?

Also I notice an improvement to the typesetting. The font is still really getting to me however. This font has a lot of whitespace and is pretty spaced out compared to other fonts used in other manga. Because the font is not compact, oftentimes your sentences don't fit cleanly into the bubbles. I don't know enough about typesetting to suggest a font, but pick something that's more condensed.

 

[Furaiya]

Thank you for the TL,

A bit of a nitpick here. Is the courier trying to call her mom? Or is it actually directed at her? I cant read the raws, but if its the latter if shouldnt be "Mrs"

 

[JumboWheat01]

Ya know... I think the mangaka may have a thing for feat. Dunno why I was getting that thought this chapter.

 

[Superbacon]

Thank you for the TL,

A bit of a nitpick here. Is the courier trying to call her mom? Or is it actually directed at her? I cant read the raws, but if its the latter if shouldnt be "Mrs"

It's written as Kuroiwa-San, so I think he's just being polite.

 

[Superbacon]

Wait is Prez's name Yuuki or Nozomi? The envelope is adressed to Kuroiwa Nozomi but her brother calls her Yuuki?

Also I notice an improvement to the typesetting. The font is still really getting to me however. This font has a lot of whitespace and is pretty spaced out compared to other fonts used in other manga. Because the font is not compact, oftentimes your sentences don't fit cleanly into the bubbles. I don't know enough about typesetting to suggest a font, but pick something that's more condensed.

It might be that the envelope isn't addressed to her. I had a really hard time actually reading the Kanji, really small symbols on the original. So I think I messed it up, probably shouldn't have tried tbf. The font is definitely needing improvement, I'm gonna try to find the best font over my next day off. Thank you for being honest!

 

[volodyuka]

Ya know... I think the mangaka may have a thing for feat. Dunno why I was getting that thought this chapter.

mangaka started as hentai artist, just saying)

by the way Kuroiwa rides SYM Wolf 150cc, I know because I looked and asked for it!

 

[Arithmetic]

Thanks for the new chapter! There's a little guide for typesetting on this site, it's pretty handy https://mangadex.org/title/08e1f85a-bb12-4fe4-aec5-0d7a80b3a261/anonblack-s-typesetting-guide

 

[Homura]

It's written as Kuroiwa-San, so I think he's just being polite.

Just want to chime in, "Mrs." is used for married woman so unless yuuki is married or it's directed at her mom, it should be "Ms." or simply be left as "-san" so you don't have to deal with guessing the prefix/suffix.
Also your type setting and overall quality has immensely improved! It's good to see not just the font change but also the text filling out the bubble properly. Thanks for the chapter.

 

[Superbacon]

Just want to chime in, "Mrs." is used for married woman so unless yuuki is married or it's directed at her mom, it should be "Ms." or simply be left as "-san" so you don't have to deal with guessing the prefix/suffix.
Also your type setting and overall quality has immensely improved! It's good to see not just the font change but also the text filling out the bubble properly. Thanks for the chapter.

Ah, I see my error. Damn I triple checked before I posted it too. I think I am able to fix this error and another I made, but we will see.

Thank you for your feedback too, I really appreciate it

 

[no_name65]

mangaka started as hentai artist

Are they used pseudonym? Link me up bro.

 

[havelmom]

you and me are mortal enemies now

 

[Superbacon]

you and me are mortal enemies now

I only said it cause I'm a mechanic lol. She could ruin her feet! Think about that

 

[Superbacon]

Hey Everyone, I really appreciate all the support and feedback. I am glad that there has been improvements, Still a lot to work on though. For Chapter 66 i believe it is the start of volume 12(Raw source isn't really keen on sorting by volume), So I'm going to take a bit longer to get this next chapter as right as i can get it. I am also moving to the east coast next week so ill be pretty busy doing that. I'll be dragging a few friends into this as testers for a new better font than Comic sans, which is what this chapter had. But i hope to have 66 out by October 10th. I have the raws for 66, but none of its done other than that.

If Dekoboko Scanlations never comes back to this, i hope that i can get to a point where i can provide you all the same quality as them. Once again though, Thank you so much for everything, I hope i continue to exceed your expectations!