TS Tensei shite Masaka no Sub Heroine ni. - Vol. 2 Ch. 10.6 - Bonus Novel

[MangaDex]

 

[xanon]

Knew Yuri would be wearing some nice stuff under the habit.

 

[ninkek]

Thanks for translating these short stories. They have been immensely enjoyable.
Fio really is best girl

 

[HawkGoggles]

Why is this not in the main story? Are these extras for the manga or naturally woven in for the web novel. Doesn't make it less trashy but shows the writer could do better if they tried. And if they are purely bonuses, why not use this time to fix the story itself in this version. At least flesh out the characters more naturally. The web novel is already finished.

 

[ninkek]

Why is this not in the main story? Are these extras for the manga or naturally woven in for the web novel.

Extras in the manga

 

[frubam]

Obviously feels like a lot more work translating short stories than chapters(kinda), but it was an interesting addition to the story. Appreciate the translation =03.

 

[LecherousLeech]

Why is this not in the main story? Are these extras for the manga or naturally woven in for the web novel. Doesn't make it less trashy but shows the writer could do better if they tried. And if they are purely bonuses, why not use this time to fix the story itself in this version. At least flesh out the characters more naturally. The web novel is already finished.

It’s kind of boggling how incredibly sincere and wholesome these short stories are, whereas the manga is just alternating comedy and sex scenes.

 

[Quarnozian]

It's kinda strange that there's only 2 sizes for boobs in this party... Massive and Minuscule.

Why skip the entire middle-ground? Maybe the artist has never seen real boobs?

 

[Strela]

Why is this not in the main story? Are these extras for the manga or naturally woven in for the web novel. Doesn't make it less trashy but shows the writer could do better if they tried. And if they are purely bonuses, why not use this time to fix the story itself in this version. At least flesh out the characters more naturally. The web novel is already finished.

Bonus short story in manga adaptation of light novel is extremely common. Don't blame the author for this, it's very often not their decision.

 

[HawkGoggles]

Bonus short story in manga adaptation of light novel is extremely common. Don't blame the author for this, it's very often not their decision.

What do you mean, "don't blame them"? They wrote it. The problem isn't the extra stories. They're... a little decent. I just wish some of this could have been retro fitted into the main plot. Whether the writer wanted to do that and the editor didn't give them the chance or they didn't feel like it at all, there's no else to blame but the person who wrote the story.

 

[Strela]

What do you mean, "don't blame them"? They wrote it. The problem isn't the extra stories. They're... a little decent. I just wish some of this could have been retro fitted into the main plot. Whether the writer wanted to do that and the editor didn't give them the chance or they didn't feel like it at all, there's no else to blame but the person who wrote the story.

I don't think you understand, the decision to add it is not theirs. The mangaka who worked on this are different person from the author of the original work who worked on those short stories. They just told the author the manga need some bonus short story so he worked on it. I don't think he was even involved in the manga adaptation storyboard meeting because they commonly don't

 

[HawkGoggles]

I don't think you understand, the decision to add it is not theirs. The mangaka who worked on this are different person from the author of the original work who worked on those short stories. They just told the author the manga need some bonus short story so he worked on it. I don't think he was even involved in the manga adaptation storyboard meeting because they commonly don't

Whether the writer wanted to do that and the editor didn't give them the chance or they didn't feel like it at all, there's no else to blame but the person who wrote the story.

The thing that I hate is the source material that seemingly hasn't been changed. That's why I specifically wrote "Writer" and not the "Artists, or Mangaka". And a changes from web novels and light novels are not uncommon in adaptations. So i don't think its unreasonable to wish that the story is spruced up a little bit, when the original writer is still involved in this version, writing more new stories for it.