Despite there being a few too many toothy grins for my taste I'd say this series is actually quite good. The beginning is slightly weak but it quickly improves.
The art has a lot of personality to it which is always refreshing. The story is simplistic but it is fully aware of it. The fact that...
Seems pretty interesting, especially for a first project. Artwork it quite nice as well. Be cool to see where it goes. I will say that the intro could've been paced a bit better but that's really my only criticism at this point.