Even though what a previous comment has said is valid. I personally think that what this story lacks is motivation, rather your motivation. What kind of story would you like to draw? That should be your main focus; over any other story or character elements.
Why is the dam blacksmith not in a black smithing guild of his own! He could literally sell weapons to all other guilds and become stacked in cash and retire at 25 if he wanted! Even if adventuring was his thing he could do that too, colaboraré with guilds he knows well and form temporary...
An inferior weapon would most definitely reduce the DPS, seeng as the sword in question can literally spit fire.
Your remark about companies outsourcing cheaper and less qualified labor is definitely relevant.
But it feels less justified in this case, the weapons were already paid for, and...
Shire there are no 1 to 1 translations of I pronouns in English compared to Japanese, however there are a few ways in which the intent can be communicated.
Neo-pronouns have been on the rise lately.
There is also: one self, one’s, Ik (archaic), your servant, this one (third person), myself...
Most common in the middle ages were wood tubs, waterproofed with beeswax or flax oil. Imagine a really large wood bucket. Bath houses were fairly common during a time too. And a cover almost like an Indian TP was placed on top to preserve the heat.
The issue with stone is, how are you gonna...
Hello dear writers and readers alike, may I interest you in the possibility of NOT RUSHING YOUR STORY AND ALIENATING YOUR AUDIENCE by making the social and economic fall of a character organic in any discernible way. First introduce your reader to the status quo, then introduce your first then...