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@Spicadays Pg 12. "But that dosen't explain" should be "But that doesn't explain"

@Spicadays Pg 14. "She's a Shaolin diciple, it's not like that!" should be "She's a Shaolin disciple, it's not like that!"

@Spicadays Pg 9. "Then there was the tournement,." should be "Then there was the tournament." Also Pg 9. "All aspects of the tournement was controlled by me." should be "All aspects of the tournament was controlled by me." Pg 10. "Inspector Sima should oversee the tourmenent," should be...

@Spicadays Pg 23. "I am arresting you for two counts of murder and conspiricy with the demon cult." should be "I am arresting you for two counts of murder and for conspiring with the demon cult."

@Spicadays Pg 1. "There's a shrine on top of shining mountatin." should be "There's a shrine on top of shining mountain." Pg 14. "Seem a bit much." should be "Seems a bit much." Pg 16. "But I haven't encountered a single anbush." should be "But I haven't encountered a single ambush."

@Spicadays Pg 11. "I came her to fulfil his dying wish." should be "I came here to fulfil his final wish." Also Pg 11. "Fortunetly, a kind passer-by lent me her clothes." should be "Fortunately, a kind passer-by lent me her clothes."

@Spicadays Pg3. "They dissapeared into the mist." should be "They disappeared into the mist." Pg 11. "Aggrevated assault against a public servant." should be "Aggravated assault against a public servant."

@spicadays Pg 3 "When did he have a diciple?" should be "When did he have a disciple?" Also, there's no real answer to that as all the girls are best girls in their own way, even Yu Renjie.

@Spicadays Pg 3. "Inspector, I finally found you." should maybe be "Inspector, I've finally found you." Pg 5. "Dai Shixiong, what are you doing her?" should be "Dai Shixiong, what are you doing here?" pg 16. "It dosen't matter, Cornbread is our friend." should be "It doesn't matter, Cornbread is...

@spicadays (Optional?)pg. 4 "I remember you said you would eat you sword if you lost." should maybe be "I remembered that you said you would eat your sword if you lost." (Optional) Also pg 4 "Um, I remebered I'm late for my daily sword polishing." should be "Um, I remembered I'm late for my...

@Spicadays Pg 1. "shush" should be "Shush." Pg 4 "Aight." should be "Alright." Pg 12 "Did you notice any suspicous individuals?" should be "Did you notice any suspicious individuals?" Also pg 12 "Nothing suspicous." should be "Nothing suspicious." Also, implied faux yuri or yuri bait. I don't...

@spicadays pg 12. "Their existance is pointless." should be "Their existence is pointless." pg 16 "The details will be revealed the day of the competition." should maybe be "The details will be revealed on the day of the competition."

@spicadays pg15 "You are only covering her because you are in kahoot!." should be "You are only covering her because you are in cahoots with her!" OR "You are only covering her because you are colluding with her!" pg 17 "But I promsise to continue the investigation." should be "But I promise to...

@spicadays pg 3. "I've always know about it." should be "I've always known about it." pg 6. "I need to get this off by chest," should maybe be "I need to get this off my chest," pg 10. "Their strict dicipline should whip you back in shape." should be "Their strict discipline should whip you back...

@spicadays Pg1 "But it dosen't seem to have any effect." should be "But it doesn't seem to have any effect." (Optional) Pg 8 "I am not being bullied and I am not weak!" would work better like "I am not being bullied nor am I weak!"(Optional) Pg15 "I call expel it using Shaolin internal energy."...